Needs improvement.
This definately needs improvement, it's not bad. But you definately could improve on the drawings. Especially the hands looked terrible snapped together like that. Might clean things up a bit too, for example the saturday line at the commentators position is very weird looking.
The sound needs improvement too, I had to listen very carefully to hear what their saying, maybe buy a better microphone or something.
It didn't really make me laugh out loud either, but maybe that's because I didn't understand half of it.
Anyways, you're on the right road, just continue practicing.