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Okay,

very smooth animation, I'll give you that. The sound was pretty nice too. Allthough it could be a little bit more crisp and clear but meh.
The joke was a bit lame and that ruined the movie because it was very short.
You should definately continue this into a series but use colour and extend it more.

Hmm

The sound wasn't that good, especially the voice of Bush was hard to hear. The 'subtitle' was more of a 'anywheretitle' and was not readable. The backgrounds were badly drawn, the characters were okay.
I chuckled a bit, so that's okay.
The button to go to the dress-up was annoying and should be done better. The dress-up was rather boring but it was a pre-loader game so meh.

Needs improvement.

This definately needs improvement, it's not bad. But you definately could improve on the drawings. Especially the hands looked terrible snapped together like that. Might clean things up a bit too, for example the saturday line at the commentators position is very weird looking.
The sound needs improvement too, I had to listen very carefully to hear what their saying, maybe buy a better microphone or something.
It didn't really make me laugh out loud either, but maybe that's because I didn't understand half of it.
Anyways, you're on the right road, just continue practicing.

darkspike responds:

Dude, i know you're trying to be constuctive and all, but I just looked at your flash and your other reviews. You clearly have no idea what you're talking about. I know the sound isn't perfect, but don't insult my art, it's a shit lot better than anything you've made.

Nice,

Very funny, the lipsync was pretty good, could be better though, because that's like all there is to the animation.
The sound was perfect, allthough the movie was quite big, maybe you should try some audio optimization to make the filesize a litlle less big.
Anyways, I laughed pretty hard at this so good job.
Make more!

MACception responds:

Ya know, I've tried to make the lip sync better...I just dont know how to make it that bit closer...I'll see what I can do, 'cause I want better lip syncing more than you do, I'm sure :P Anywho, I'm HAPPY you thought it was funny...hopefuly I can make you guys laugh yet again.

Very nice,

I liked this sprite movie, lots of different sprites were used for the better. The tweens were very smooth, and I especially liked the background effects. The camera was done very good too.
The sound effects were nice, the music was very nice, the voices were a bit unbalanced at times (sometimes very loud, sometimes very soft) but overall very nice.
I didn't like the intro with the paintbrush text but that meh.
Next time, longer?

Heh,

The animation wasn't that bad. It made me chuckle for a bit too. But it still was too unoriginal. A stick fight has been done before so many times and this wasn't very different from the rest.
The music was okay, for some reason I really like that loop. The sound effects were pretty well done too.
Next time maybe use different colour per stick so you know what stick you're looking at in a zoom in, but I'd rather see some fully animated charactars. The background was a bit dull maybe, but still okay.

I like this,

this was random, but the lipsync was very well done. Good job on the sound too. It was pretty funny too.

Make more but longer!

Very good,

The graphics were pretty good, I don't like the 'no limbs' idea but you did well on your drawings and the animation was very smooth.
It was pretty funny too, which I liked, the voices wery very clear and very nicely done.
I don't see how you can improve on this except making the movie longer!

Okay,

The animation was bad, but you obviously didn't go for animation, more for some funny shit or something. Well, it made me chuckle because of the song and the stupidness of this.
I like that this is very actual at the moment with the rockets being fired at the moment.
Next time, better animation, if you work harder you can score higher, but I don't think that was your goal anyway.

Foreverkul responds:

Well, then vote accordingly to the type of flash it is, its obviously not serious.

Not that good,

First of all use the HIT keyframe in your buttons, makes them a lot easier to click.
Second of all, the sprites didn't look very good. You animated them poorly too. Get some better sprites, and some better animation.
The loop in the background was okay, the voices were dumb and unoriginal. Get some real voices.
The story was very dumb too, wasn't very appealing.
Next time, use better sprites, real voice actors or no voices at all (use buttons to continue the movie, that works with sprites) keep in the loop And some more animation would be nice.

HAHA!

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